Diff: ble/DiscoveredCharacteristic.h

Revision:

1048:efb29faf12fc

Parent:

1047:2d66d38d9ac9

Child:

1050:37101a458dfb

--- a/ble/DiscoveredCharacteristic.h	Mon Jan 11 08:51:27 2016 +0000
+++ b/ble/DiscoveredCharacteristic.h	Mon Jan 11 08:51:28 2016 +0000
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 class DiscoveredCharacteristic {
 public:
     struct Properties_t {
-        uint8_t _broadcast       :1; /**< Broadcasting of the value permitted. */
+        uint8_t _broadcast       :1; /**< Broadcasting the value permitted. */
         uint8_t _read            :1; /**< Reading the value permitted. */
         uint8_t _writeWoResp     :1; /**< Writing the value with Write Command permitted. */
         uint8_t _write           :1; /**< Writing the value with Write Request permitted. */
@@ -60,19 +60,19 @@
         }
 
     private:
-        operator uint8_t()  const; /* disallow implicit conversion into an integer */
-        operator unsigned() const; /* disallow implicit conversion into an integer */
+        operator uint8_t()  const; /* Disallow implicit conversion into an integer. */
+        operator unsigned() const; /* Disallow implicit conversion into an integer. */
     };
 
     /**
      * Initiate (or continue) a read for the value attribute, optionally at a
-     * given offset. If the Characteristic or Descriptor to be read is longer
+     * given offset. If the characteristic or descriptor to be read is longer
      * than ATT_MTU - 1, this function must be called multiple times with
      * appropriate offset to read the complete value.
      *
-     * @return BLE_ERROR_NONE if a read has been initiated, else
+     * @return BLE_ERROR_NONE if a read has been initiated, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_INVALID_STATE if some internal state about the connection is invalid, or
-     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure already in progress, or
+     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure is already in progress, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_OPERATION_NOT_PERMITTED due to the characteristic's properties.
      */
     ble_error_t read(uint16_t offset = 0) const;
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@
      *         writeWoResponse operations; the user may want to use the onDataSent()
      *         callback for flow-control.
      *
-     * @retval BLE_ERROR_NONE Successfully started the Write procedure, else
+     * @retval BLE_ERROR_NONE Successfully started the Write procedure, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_INVALID_STATE if some internal state about the connection is invalid, or
-     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure already in progress, or
+     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure is already in progress, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_NO_MEM if there are no available buffers left to process the request, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_OPERATION_NOT_PERMITTED due to the characteristic's properties.
      */
@@ -121,9 +121,9 @@
      * @note   It is important to note that a write will generate
      *         an onDataWritten() callback when the peer acknowledges the request.
      *
-     * @retval BLE_ERROR_NONE Successfully started the Write procedure, else
+     * @retval BLE_ERROR_NONE Successfully started the Write procedure, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_INVALID_STATE if some internal state about the connection is invalid, or
-     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure already in progress, or
+     *         BLE_STACK_BUSY if some client procedure is already in progress, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_NO_MEM if there are no available buffers left to process the request, or
      *         BLE_ERROR_OPERATION_NOT_PERMITTED due to the characteristic's properties.
      */